Thursday, 7 March 2019

my holiday

2 comments:

  1. Kia Ora!
    I'm Georgia from Ohaeawai Primary School. It sounds like you had a wonderful time on your holiday. You added in lots of detail and I love the way you put Where, What, Why, Who, When and How in at the top. But, you might want to read through a couple of sentences before you publish.
    Blog you later, Georgia.

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  2. Kia Ora!
    Georgia here from Ohaeawai Primary School. It sounds like you had a lot of fun on your holiday. You added lots of detail. I love the way you added the Who, What, When, Why, Where and How. You might want to check some of your sentences again.
    Blog you later, Georgia.

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